From: Laury GvR <laury@gaslightmedia.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2014 16:13:17 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: More text edits
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More text edits
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diff --git a/index.php b/index.php
index 53f4fb1..b65d5e2 100644
--- a/index.php
+++ b/index.php
@@ -27,9 +27,13 @@
         <div id="content">
             <h2>Emergency Notifications straight from Emergency Responders to you</h2>
             <p>
-                Receive notifications about emergencies that may affect your home, 
-                workplace, child's school, parents' home, or any other locations 
-                within the Tri-County region of Charlevoix, Cheboygan and Emmet Counties.
+                The *BE ALERT* Emergency Notification System provides accurate, 
+                immediate emergency notifications from your local public safety 
+                agency to your cell, work or home phone, via text, email or voice 
+                message. Receive notifications about emergencies that may affect 
+                your home, workplace, child's school, parents' home, or any other 
+                locations within the Tri-County region of Charlevoix, Cheboygan 
+                and Emmet Counties. 
             </p>
             <ul>
                 <li>
@@ -73,12 +77,10 @@
                 <h3>Your Preferences</h3>
                 <ul>
                     <li>
-                        <bold>Locations:</bold> You can choose to receive emergency 
-                        alerts about specific neighborhoods, including around your home, 
-                        workplace, your or your child’s school. You can choose to 
-                        receive emergency alerts about specific neighborhoods, including 
-                        around your home, workplace, your or your child’s school (as 
-                        many as five locations)
+                        <bold>Locations:</bold> Locations: You can choose to receive 
+                        emergency alerts about specific neighborhoods, including 
+                        around your home, workplace, your or your child’s school 
+                        (as many as five locations) 
                     </li>
                     <li>
                         <bold>Alert Types:</bold> Choose what kind of alerts you want